Maurice's Family Blog

My family is full of surprises. This collage is a representation of my family, and that there are definitely two sides to each of us. This was inspired by the phrase “there are two sides to every story. Well here are 2 pictures to this story. At moments we can be the most serious people and at other times just a house full of characters. Just let me take a few moments to expound on that. I’ll start with my wife Michelle. Here you can see she is an amazing business woman, a real go getter and a hard worker. But on the other side she’s pure goofy, and not the good goofy, it’s all silly jokes and fake wrestling moves with her. She is a model and a hiker all into one. Our kids should honestly have their own TV show or Youtube channel. Our oldest Ryan is a football player, loves playing sports and thinks he’s the life of the party as well. But on the other hand, he is a gaming nerd, that loves to just chill and watch tv. On one hand you have this brute on the field and on the other an artistic, gentle bear. My next son, Trey is just a little more complicated. He is all flash, and loves to put on a show. The crazy thing he hates people, and crowds and does want to be obligated to entertain. He may on some days be the meanest person you ever meet, and the next the most caring helpful person. My daughter, Ni’Yeon is all smiles most of the time, but don’t let that fool you she has a mean streak. She prissy and sassy all at the same time. Like her mom, she’s a natural boss, but doesn’t really want to be. Lastly is my youngest Kayden. He’s at the point where he’s always funny, until he sticks his foot in his mouth. He wants to be a big boy like the other guys, but still finds himself being the baby. Outside of that he a real cuddle bug, but when he’s mad, he can be a real monster. I think this explains my photo and my family a little more. Just wait and see what we do next.

I didn’t make many changes to my draft. Based off the feedback I received I felt like I had a pretty good collage. I didn’t want to use another picture of us or our favorite place because I didn’t want to make it too busy, I feel sometimes less is more. I agree that the background in my draft wasn’t very good so I changed it up. I feel the background will highlight the family better. Lastly, I got a review that suggested That I make the image bigger, but I feel that it was a decent size.  I got a lot of encouraging words from my peers which helped me be successful.

My family is full of surprises. This collage is a representation of my family, and that there are definitely two sides to each of us. This was inspired by the phrase “there are two sides to every story. Well here are 2 pictures to this story. At moments we can be the most serious people and at other times just a house full of characters. Just let me take a few moments to expound on that. I’ll start with my wife Michelle. Here you can see she is an amazing business woman, a real go getter and a hard worker. But on the other side she pure goofy, and not the good goofy, its all silly jokes and fake wrestling moves with her. She is a model and a hiker all into one. Our kids should honestly have their own TV show or Youtube channel. Our oldest Ryan is a touch football player. Loves playing sports and thinks he’s the life of the party as well. But on the other hand he is a gaming nerd, that loves to just chill and watch tv. On one hand you have this brute on the field and on the other an artistic, gentle bear. My next son, Trey is just a little more complicated. He is all flash, and loves to put on a show. The crazy thing he hates people, and crowds and does want to be obligated to entertain. He may on some days be the meanest person you ever meet, and the next the most caring helpful person. My daughter, Ni’Yeon is all smiles most of the time, but don’t let that fool you she has a mean streak. She prissy and sassy all at the same time. Like her mom, she’s a natural boss, but doesn’t really want to be. Lastly is my youngest Kayden. He’s at the point where he’s always funny, until he sticks his foot in his mouth. He wants to be a big boy like the other guys, but still finds himself being the baby. Outside of that he a real cuddle bug, but when he’s mad he can be a real monster. I think this explains my photo and my family a little more. Just wait and see what we do next.